Second Draft of Trailer
Tinika and I used the feedback from our first draft to edit our trailer. We needed to make a lot of improvements but, this was a lot easier as our friend Amber let us edit on her macbook. The software was so much easier to use which also helped with the limited amount of time we had to edit it.
The constructive criticism we received from our teacher and our class helped us to develop our trailer to increase our grade.
After hearing feedback about our second draft of trailer, we are a lot happier. We are now on a high c grade, low b grade. This is promising for us both.
The main piece of feedback we recieved was to change the text on screen to reference the character more rather than the audience. This is due to the fact that some of the text on screen does not make sense. We will be changing this as soon as we have time and access to the macbook but, hopefully as soon as possible.
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